The war

[dragonfly]

I love your Idea's Kennywolf! Thank you for sharing them with me.

Revised story Ideas.

I want Grey to become really close friends with Cara and for Grey to start having nightmares. At first the nightmares will be incomplete and he wont know what is going on just that they are really vivid and he is doing something violent in his dream.

During the time that Grey and Cara become close there are a series of battles. The first one they loose and this is what inspires Gray to learn how to fight to help out around the camp so they can’t be defeated like they were last time. Rafe will be the one to help train Grey in the ways of warfare. The second one Grey will help in and they win then Keir asks for his war prize (This is when OreielDrakon will make her appearance with a beautiful maiden) And this is where Rafe becomes overly protective of Cara and jealous of the attention that Cara gives to Grey. A fight brakes out and it becomes a battle of honor. ( I say battle of honor so that Grey can still live amongst them.) Rafe will be defeated and die from his wounds only after he confesses to Cara that he truly loved her and it hurt him that she seemed to love Grey and that all he wanted to do was make her happy. Immediately after his death is the final battle where they win and the war prize is finally given to Keir.

They then return home and Cara finds out that she is going to be knighted. The moment before she is to go into the ceremony Grey tells her about his dreams because he finally understands them. Cara realizes that she can not be wed to her brother and feels the pain at the loss of Rafe even more then before. She walks into her ceremony with tears on her face.

[roseprince]

Yeah we can do that. ;D

[ketu]

Dose he really have to die? I understand where your coming from but come on. Okay Wait *deep breath* Dose anyone have any idea on what I should be then after Rafe dies?

[dragonfly]

You could be the queen, I am sure that you could get her sour hard to please spoiled personality just right. Through out the story you could be sending messages back and forth with Keir. You know to update on the state of the war and stuff.

[ketu]

All right I'll make a profile for her and start useing her after the first battle because thats when the first messeges can be sent.

[KennyWolf]

i got another idea to add onto that... maybe Grey could leave and then come back with the thought of killing humans is a good thing. its a goood way to start a family disbute also ^_^

[dragonfly]

Cara is human so how dose that work? Then he would think it's okay to kill her. So they would have to be like half siblings and have the same mom but diffrent dads. SO lets say for history of the family that Cara/Greys mom is raped by a wolf-anthro and that is how Grey was concived. When their mom finds out she is pragnent the town is aginst her they think she is a whore but a man stepps forward to save her and says it was him and that he'll marry her. So lets not do the human killing thing.

[KennyWolf]

i said before that a mage from the wolf tribe could have taken grey as a child and had changed him into a wolf anthro

[dragonfly]

Oh sorry my bad but wouldn't that still interfear with him being friends with Cara?

[KennyWolf]

yes it would... with grey leaving the camp and comming back brainwashed... beleiving that all humans are a disgrace and should be killed...

but maybe that brainwashing could be broken by Cara's love for Grey and he realises what he's done and is willing to accept the concequences.

[dragonfly]

So would he kill Rafe then or would it have to be just some random person from the camp? Because I think I like the he kills Rafe in an honor battle better then if he just killed him because then my plan of when Cara goes to see the queen her telling him she loves him and then he tells her that he is her brother wouldn't work unless he was a prisoner waiting to see the queen for judgement to be passed. Then we could have it end really dramatically....

The queen orders for Grey to be killed but Cara gives up her knighthood to save Grey and run away to start all over again and we start another story. I like that idea.

[KennyWolf]

well okay, we'll go for the killing of random person (maybe a leiutenant or something) then with more killings of random people then Rafe finds out about this and this makes him angry and jealous at the same time. After the battle, Grey is captured and sentanced to death but Cara does not want this and sacrifices her knighthood (or dameship, whatever its called) to release him. then he tells her everything he knows about his past now that he remembers it. Grey could maybe be put into slavery under Kiers command and later on there could be another big war between humans and Wolves.

just to sum up things... Grey would leave first for him to become brainwashed again.

[dragonfly]

Yes, I believe that will work just fine and if we find anymore kinks we'll just have to work them out along the way.

[glow=red,2,300]End of Brain storming back to the story [/glow]

[KennyWolf]

Grey hadnt seen anyone go for Cara yet, so he decided to go into the forest and find her himself.

The forest was dark and creepy and had an eerie feel to it.

where can she be? he thought

Grey carried on walking around the forest to find her but still no luck

i hope i do find her

[dragonfly]

Cara came around the corner wet cold and tired only to bump into the stranger that had walked into camp that day. “Excuse me,” she mumbled as she walked around him.